Worked on typing up Where Angels Tread in 3rd person. Story much better now. Words came easier, scene not as stilted as it was before.
Got up to scene 32 in I Love You Because revisions. Kind of wishing I had not taken it on. Had put all this time and energy into something of mine, but this could lead to bigger/better things.
Showing posts with label ILYB. Show all posts
Showing posts with label ILYB. Show all posts
Saturday, July 7, 2012
Thursday, July 5, 2012
ILYB/ Where Angels Tread 4
Edited a few scenes of I <3 U Because
Worked on editing/rewriting ...Angels Tread. Still not working for me. Thinking of switching the story to 3rd person. Distancing myself from it some may help. Original idea was to have some stories from 1st, some from 3rd, but not sure switching back & forth would work. Might be too disorienting to reader. So will probably just go w/ all stories being told from 3rd person perspective.
Worked on editing/rewriting ...Angels Tread. Still not working for me. Thinking of switching the story to 3rd person. Distancing myself from it some may help. Original idea was to have some stories from 1st, some from 3rd, but not sure switching back & forth would work. Might be too disorienting to reader. So will probably just go w/ all stories being told from 3rd person perspective.
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