Where Angels Tread 5/ I Love You Because

Worked on typing up Where Angels Tread in 3rd person. Story much better now. Words came easier, scene not as stilted as it was before.

Got up to scene 32 in I  Love You Because revisions. Kind of wishing I had not taken it on. Had put all this time and energy into something of mine, but this could lead to bigger/better things.

ILYB/ Where Angels Tread 4

Edited a few scenes of I <3 U Because

Worked on editing/rewriting ...Angels Tread. Still not working for me. Thinking of switching the story to 3rd person. Distancing myself from it some may help. Original idea was to have some stories from 1st, some from 3rd, but not sure switching back & forth would work. Might be too disorienting to reader. So will probably just go w/ all stories being told from 3rd person perspective.

Where Angels Tread 3

Finished story ...Angels Tread. Needs a lot of work, but have something decent to go on now. Cut sentimentality. Try for hard hitting Hemingwayesque prose.

Where Angels Tread 2

Added better opening. Tell about black janitor that used to eat his lunch in the waiting room. Then go into what I wrote yesterday.

Where Angels Tread 1

Started on first story for Angels Tread. Don't like it. Doesn't go anywhere. Going to start over tomorrow.